Wednesday, March 30, 2016

Alternate ending

( Nora leaves....)
.....
(doesn't return.)
*years later*
Helmer: I wouldn't how Nora is doing...
Nurse: There's someone at the door for you. 
Helmer: Tell them I'm busy.
Nurse: I think you should answer it. You could never get a second chance in your life. 
Helmer: You don't mean..... (Silence)
Nurse:(looks at the door then back at helmer) Go.. 
Helmer:(gets up and walks down the hall) Yes?
Nora: Hi Trovald. 
Helmer: Do you want to come inside? (Opens door wider)
Nora: Okay. 
(In the living room)
Helmer: It's been over 15 years. 
Nora: Yes it has. 
Helmer: So... Why did you come back? 
Nora: I wanted to tell you that I got married. (Shows helmer ring) I want to take my children with me. 
Helmer: (gets up) NO. You can not take the only thing I care about! 
Nora: I'm taking my children in with me to my husband's house. Nothing you can do to stop me. 
Helmer: The children don't like you because you are blundered as to leave your children.
Nora: Don't say that to me! You have no right of me anymore. If you don't give me my children, my husband will get them to me. (Yelling)
Helmer: You are basicallu making a tumultuous in my home. 
Nora: Who do you think you're talking to? Don't you have any respect for yourself? IF I WANT TO SEE MY CHILDREN I WILL!
Helmer: I'll never let my children see a hypocrite.
Nora: What do you mean?
Helmer: You left your children like your mom. 
Nora: Don't you start with me. (Tears in eyes)
Helmer: Leave. 
Nora: What? (Confused)
Helmer: You heard me. 
Nora: You already know my husband will come back for them. 
Helmer: Nurse! (Yells across the room)
Nurse: Yes? (Runs into room)
Helmer: Show her out. 
Nurse: (pauses) ..ok. 
(Nora leaves, the next day Nora husband came with a lawsuit taking the children away from Trovald)

2 comments:

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  2. I like the way you ended it, the plot twist was so cool.

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